Chalis With The Wine Overflowing

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by ~*Dark_Light*~ (I just keep on posting!) on Sunday, 03-Jun-2007 17:02:08

Smooth the wine when consumed from the chalis overflowing
Not any old wine mind you, not the corner store variety
Certainly not the wine from leathery dried out skins
Oh no my lovely for the wine is new, fresh squeezed, ripe from the vine
Come on now, you must know what I am talking about, don’t be shy
Come, drink till thirst is quenched
From the wine in the chalis overflowing

Long many days you’ve searched, traversing from pub to pub
Searching for that wine perfected
That wine that mystifies and satisfies
Drunken in your sorrows, consumed by grief and heartaches
Drunken too, when hopes were high, when challenges met with victory
Come, my lovely, for your search is soon to find its fulfillment found
Come away with me and taste, know completely and be completely known

The chalis is overflowing and awaits so longingly for your arrival
Waiting eagerly for your hands to take of the chalis
Taken with soul completely extended, taking of all therein contained
Won’t you partake, emercing yourself in the wine that is overflowing
Once new wine you’ve experienced, the old no longer satisfies
Totally drinking your fill till thirst is…
Swallowed up in flames of devoted passion

~*Thunderous MidNight*~

Post 2 by speedie (move over school!) on Thursday, 07-Jun-2007 10:19:22

Incredible and very very good
Stevie.

Post 3 by ~*Dark_Light*~ (I just keep on posting!) on Thursday, 14-Jun-2007 23:08:39

ThankYou for the review that gives those words of encouragement.
Much appreciated
~*Thunderous MidNight*~